7 thoughts on “KaJo

  1. Very well-written thesis. Perhaps you should cut “and actions” from your argument. You’ll have plenty to explore if you limit your discussion to just objects. That would make things easier for you. Again, great work.

  2. Great job! I really agree with your point and you have a good use of words. Since I have to say something critical I think you should choose between actions or objects. Good Job!

  3. YEAH I agree with Greg, but if you don’t change that it makes it seem like you’re unsure in a way, by saying or, so…Yup. But, i liked it a lot!

  4. I agree with this thesis statement and I think you did a really good job, the ending, however, sounds a little awkward to me when you say “most difficult emotions”.

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